Hanazuka Komiko: The search for a waterbending teacher

Full Name: hanazuka komiko

Gender: Female


Age: 13


Element: water


Birthplace: N. Water Tribe



Position: amature waterbender livin like everybody else



Personality:is a glass half empty kinda girl, is hopefull but know not to put her hopes way up there she can get sarcastic and rarely agressive to thous who get in her way( tries to solve conflict with words instead). She is timid at firts but can open up as a friendship grows. Isint really strong but thats her goal to be a waterbending master. Can ber a bit of an air head when in come to strategy and different styles of fighting.


Abilities:waterbends at beginer level but is verry good at defense since she learned how to hold her own like an earthbender by watching earthbenders in her home town. Her water bending in ofencive mode is a compleat tragedy, since she only knew earth benders she keeps trying to imitate them, causing her water bending to most of the time litteraly "blow up in her face".


Appearance: She has a dark brow tint to her skin tone. She is also verry tall for her young age (almost 6 feet tall) . She wears baggy black pants with a grey belt with an earth kinghdom insighnia on it , dark brown boots with a black stripe running down the side, a short dark green tank top and light green gloves.she has long straight dark brown hair held up with a green ribbon. Has orange color eyes and verry wide eye shape, body shape is a bit "chuby" people with arrogant minds would say but shes actually normal and healthy side.



History: born in the northen water tribe but left to die during a blizzard when she was only 2. She was taken by a pair of hikers on their way to the N. Water Tribe though they looked and asked everywear and everyone but her parents were never found and so she was adopted into their family, though she was gifted with being a waterbender her parents refuse to let her learn until her 13 birthday.Every day since then she has been in full moon bay waiting and hoping to find a waterbender who is willing to take a leap of faith on her...though threw it all she has had pretty much no luck even at times when she finds water benders like her, they eather have to littel time or arent ready to give up time to train such a young water bender.

(note: she is verry young so for now her story is verry short, as time passes ill write ALOT more).

you have to first create a character.

the proper template can be found here.

=Zul

i think i fixed it (not sure)
if you can please check

moved it to characters for ya. [this is Zulera BTW]

I think before this will get accepted you will need to add a bit more substance to it, ie making the paragraphs a bit longer.

I'm notoriously harsh when it comes to character profiles, so I'll leave that part up to the other admins, who will see it within a couple hours. however, take my advice and make it longer, as you're that much more likely to get accepted. =)

=Meili=

thank you for helping me lately M'lady

Okay, just a few more things. Your appearance and history don't meet the minimum word requirements, but you could probably reach it easy. Just write in complete sentences and you can probably reach it.

And when you do start RPing, make sure you RP in 3rd person, like this: Loki was walking, instead of: I was walking.

Okay ill get right on it!

Approved. Sorry, I didn't know you updated this. :/