Miyuki

Full Name: Miyuki. That's it.
Gender: Turtle-Duck. (Female)
Age: 23
Element: Earth/MetalBending
Birthplace: Kyoshi Island
Position: I'm a Shadow // Kyoshi Legion Sergeant

Personality: You wanna learn about me, eh? Most people say I'm a bit too laid back, especially for a shadow. Well I'm not. I'm always focused, just on mostly the wrong things. My friends say that I fall in love way to easily, but I just believe in love at first sight, alright! I also act like a cat sometimes, and people think I'm weird because of it. I also have a temper, and I don't care who who you are, your going to be on the reviving end of a fist.

Abilities: Well, besides being like the best metalbender ever, I also have a sword about as big as my waist and only a bit shorter than myself. My superiors say that I'm no master at earthbending, and an expert at best, but I think they're just jealous. I can fight with a lot of s, but the sword is pretty hard to miss. Even though I have that sword, I usually kick. (While she is a expert earthbender, she relies on metalbender to hold her sword up. She levitates the iron and is constantly holding it up. If she losses her consecration, it'll drop like a 300 pound rock. She has the ability to levitate earth and metal, and she can perform harder bending techniques, but she is not a master.)

Appearance:
Height: 5'3
Weight: Not much...
Eyes: Green
Hair: Brown

I have a more petite frame. I wear a orange ribbon my brown hair, which is down to my neck, and I usually wear a white tank-top and baggy orange cloth pants. I don't wear shoes. I have a few cuts here and there, and a burn on my left hand. Sticking your hand out isn't the best defense is it? (She basically looks like Haruhi, but older and with different clothes) I have more of a hourglass figure. Also I have a nice ass. Ask anyone in one of the fire nation bars. *winks*

Weaponry & Other Gear: A 300 pound sword. To me it feels about 10 pounds. It's made out of the best Iron from the best smith in the Island. The hilt is wrapped in cloth.

History: I was born in Kyoshi Island with my ever-so loving parents in a modest, yet livable home. Since I was born, my father tried to force me to becoming the best earthbender that ever lived, and my mother tried to force me to become a scholar, so I jumped at the chance to leave them behind and become a Kyoshi Warrior. Before becoming a Kyoshi, I ordered a sword from a boy that lived close. He was young, but he was also one of the best blacksmiths in the entire island. I had to carry it out, he couldn't even lift the handle! Becoming a Kyoshi warrior was one of the best choices I ever made. I made lots of friends, namely Lian and June. I was finally happy with my life. Then, to make things even better, after proudly serving in the Kyoshi legion for four years, General Yu herself asked me to become one of the shadows, her personal team of bad-arses. I gratefully accepted and became a member of shadows. During the war, my left hand was burned by some fire nation dude with a lucky shot. Now, I'm just living a normal life after the war.

I APPROVE. However, I do want to stress that I'd like to see some updates to this ASAP going into more detail across the board. While I get the general idea of the character, I'd like more. Namely, an explanation for the character's superhuman strength. If it has something to do with metalbending, please make a note of how that works as soon as possible.

I'm not approving as a master earthbender. Talented is what I see here. I would say expert earthbender, moderate metalbender, exceptionally skilled swordsman. Pending the opinions of the other staff, of course.

ah heck. it looks good enough. short, but I didnt see anything wrong with it, though that sword thing has the potential to be OP. I'll just watch it, but till then I'll give you this.

Rank of Sergeant has been conferred upon this character by General Yu's authority. Edited for content and format.