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Azula
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Join date : 2012-05-29

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Age: 19
Position: Fire Nation Princess
Nation: Fire Nation

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PostSubject: Princess Azula II   Princess Azula II EmptyTue May 29, 2012 8:41 am

Full Name: Azula Ursa Kuo II
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Element: Fire
Birthplace: Fire Nation Capital
Position: Princess of the Fire Nation

Personality: Stubborn and determined, Azula resembles the one who she took the name one, though her motivations are less driven by Insanity, and more for the affection and protection of her people.

Always having a trick up her sleeve, it is extremely rare that she does any clumsy moves at all. with- no pun intended, Fiery Determination. She has a rare hint of Sarcasm in much of what she says, And always having a taunt for her sparring partner or opponent.

Though Azula does not appreciate what Azuila the 1st did, she sees why she did it; for the love of her people, though she was a tad insane, She hopes she will never fall into madness as Azula the 1st did.

Azula has a lust to serve her people, and she doesn't mean serving lunch, she takes threats to her people very seriously, appearing to be a true patriot and defender of the firelord. She fights when called to battle as an heir to the throne and defender of the fire nation.

Abilities: Azula has abilities of different forms, she has been learning firebending since the age of 6, and has mastered many forms of the art. She has the ability to breath fire safely, along with this she has a technique she made herself; the ability to shoot fireballs from her mouth by altering the way flamebreath works.

Along with her mastery of firebending, she is also a novice Chi-blocker, she has the ability to cancel ones bending out temporarily, though she is still learning this from great teachers, they believe one day she will become a full-blown super soldier.

Though she doesn't measure up to her father, or her brother; the Fire Lord, she is still a very powerful firebender with above average skill in the art. her Chi-Blocking lessons also taught her to be fast and nimble, able to do backflips and rolls with ease.

Appearance: http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/164/7/7/Firebender_by_Nojitsu.jpg

History: At her day of birth, Azula was named when the fire sages diagnosed that she had a future in firebending, with a similar diagnosis that Azula the 1st had, due to this close resemblance, her mother and father named her Azula Ursa Kuo II, Not in honor; but in Namesake.

For the first 6 years of her life she had watched firebenders do their art, but she was much too young to begin training below the age of six, instead of practiced acrobatics starting at the age of 4, once she reached the age of 6, some of the greatest firebending teachers in all of the fire nation were called due to the diagnosis she was given at birth to teach her the art of fire bending.

For the first four years of her training she was considered to have great prowess in the art of fire bending, her teachers said she had a bold future ahead of her in the World. Her teachers got the permission from her parents to challenge the ten year old girl to go to the North Pole with only the clothes on her back and firebending. She came out above and beyond and brought back 2 leather packs she didn't bring with her full of animal meats. (Yes she crafted the packs.)

When she returned she was exhausted, but she refused to take breaks when she returned, even when advised by her teachers. she practiced, practiced, practiced, for many years she learned and grew, and at the age of 16 she challenged one of her masters to an Agni Kai, only quoting, "We'll see who is the master now.", she defeated him triumphantly, he was offered to be spared and be banished, or be executed on the spot. He chose execution.

Now at the age of 19, she has grown much from the sweet little girl learning acrobatics she once was, she resembles Azula the 1st more then ever..


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PostSubject: Re: Princess Azula II   Princess Azula II EmptyTue May 29, 2012 10:30 pm

Uh... is this character related to a canon character? If it is, that goes against site rules.
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Birthday : 1994-11-12
Join date : 2011-09-03
Age : 29
Location : California

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Age: 20
Position: Fire Lord
Nation: Fire Nation

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PostSubject: Re: Princess Azula II   Princess Azula II EmptyWed May 30, 2012 1:03 am

The only relation to the cannon character is name sake, other than that this char is clean.

Anyhow, approved.
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Birthday : 1991-01-16
Join date : 2012-01-22
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Age: 30
Position: Avatar
Nation: Water Tribes

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PostSubject: Re: Princess Azula II   Princess Azula II EmptyWed May 30, 2012 5:35 pm

Actually, even without the canon name, this character is far from clean. This is an example of what we would call "overpowered". I'm almost certain that I could run her through a handful of Mary Sue tests to produce dangerous scores, even without knowing the inner workings of the character.
for one, there's the lack of weaknesses. regardless of one's reasoning, you can't just say "I'll write them in later" because how do we know you'll write them in. If people metagame and somehow know that you secretly broke your ankle, then I'll definitely get after them for how they knew it.
It's a matter of there being a reason for everything. to be a proficient inventor, chi-blocker, and a master firebender, among other things, that early on, is a bit unreasonable. While I do know about prodigies and the likes, there are only so many of those the world can take before the eyes start rolling. With years come experience, even in the world of RPing.

Similarly, we unfortunately can't really use the show to justify it otherwise we'd all be superpowered 12-year-olds. it was geared towards a certain audience, and little kids are easier to stretch their willing suspensions of disbelief.

With that in mind, this character needs some serious toning down. the canon connection can stay, as long as it's not an excuse for overpowerment.
This is not a discrimination for being FN. I would disapprove of a character like this even if she were EK, WT, or AN. an overpowered character is an overpowered character.
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