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Caeli
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Caeli


Posts : 22
EXP : 275
Join date : 2012-05-26

Character Description
Age: 15
Position: Gifted Earthbending-Student.
Nation: Earth Kingdom

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PostSubject: Caeli Sao-Kata   Caeli Sao-Kata EmptySat May 26, 2012 6:18 am

Full Name: Caeli Sao-Kata
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Element: Earth
Birthplace: Ba Sing Se
Position: Decent-Average Earth-Bender. [Gifted for someone her age]

Personality: Caeli is a young and quirky girl, she often uses humor at the expense of the one speaking to her. It is her nature to be cocky, However, in the end she does think things through and accomplishes things most people would expect one with her personality to fail at.

She always has another plan, even though she wouldn't seem to have anything thought of, She is always a step ahead of the rest similar to Azula in the Last Airbender, except not in 'An Evil Way' as she would choose to. She is sarcastic, calm, and collected, Always with an ace up her sleeve.
Abilities: Due to her years practicing under her mother, she learned much about the element of earth, from history, books, to being woken up with a badger mole sniffing her face! Her daily routine was sparring and bending the biggest boulder she could from the practice area in her mothers gym, along with a variety of challenges and quests her mother would send her on. She even learned the legendary skill 'Seismic Sense', Where the Earthbender can sense a persons presence just by walking barefoot, naturally. Caeli now walks with shoes think a thin layer of rock that she can pull away for seismic sense.

After much practicing and learning, she has begun learning the art of metal bending, though she has not even scratched the surface; Or even pulled off bending one piece of metal, she is still learning much of the craft, and will master it someday, but naturally; that day is not today, and it will take her a very long time to learn the enhanced art.

Appearance: https://2img.net/u/1114/35/70/38/avatars/337-2.png

History: Caeli was born to the earth people 15 Years ago, her mother was a powerful Earthbender who owned a school to teach young Earthbenders their potential, while her father was a simple cabbage merchant.

Her Mother, being a master of earthbending, learning from none other then the one who discovered Metal Bending, the great Toph. She attended Toph's school of metal bending, learning much in her days only to open her own School.

She learned from her mother and over the years mastered the skill, she would keep herself from relationships, believing that love is mostly a 'waste of time' during her training, and she was right, She did not want to have distractions, Rightfully so.

Day after day her mother would find new and different ways to challenge her daughter to test her limits. She was pushed for perfection. One day, her mother sent her on a journey across the Earth Kingdom with only the clothes on her back to find and learn from the badger moles, after a week of traveling, cooking her own meals, and Hunting, She went digging underground for tunnels to find the badger moles, She hit a stone while digging, and shattered it. under the stone was a large tunnel.

She rushed through the tunnel, seeking what was hiding in here. She saw a large spider approaching something. Badger Mole cubs! she ran as swiftly as possible, creating a pillar of earth underneath her, she would use the earth from the top of the tunnel to create another pillar downwards, crushing the spider. The Badger Mole cubs thanked her, she remained with them for a few days once the parents came back. The blind creatures kept here here for 3 months, teaching her seismic sense; a skill almost unknown to earth benders.

She returned after being taught many earthbending secrets from the original earthbending masters, she was proud, she was tired and she was hungry. Once she got home, her mother mercilessly ambushed her to test what she learned. Her mother came from behind, Caeli stomped on the ground, seismic sense activated, she found her mother and created a rock prison around her.

Her mother would clap, "Very Good! I see you found those badger Moles, darling." Caeli would smile at her mother. "I did more then find them, I learned a lot on this journey. I am one step closer to mastering Earthbending. Is there anything I cant do, Mom?"

Her Mother would only smile, "You can't bend metal yet, but that is a test for another time. Rest up and find something to eat, training starts again tomorrow morning." She would bow to her daughter respectfully.

**OPTIONAL**
Sample RP:
The Cabbage Merchant wandered through the streets, looking for people to sell to and not thinking too much of it. Suddenly a piller of earth would launch the area of his cart into the air! a young girl of 15 would leap down from the pillar of earth, chasing a firebender who had stolen from a jewelry store earlier, the cabbage cart would almost land on the firebender, as he would jab his hands upward, incinerating the cart as he would continue running.

She would hult his escape by blocking his path with rock walls, preventing his escape, she would jail him to allow time for the police to show up at the scene, she would approach the officers and tell them, "No need to thank me, Just being awesome as usual!" She would laugh and walk away from the scene with an expanded ego.

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Novai
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Posts : 332
EXP : -2
Birthday : 1994-11-12
Join date : 2011-09-03
Age : 29
Location : California

Character Description
Age: 20
Position: Fire Lord
Nation: Fire Nation

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PostSubject: Re: Caeli Sao-Kata   Caeli Sao-Kata EmptySat May 26, 2012 4:27 pm

A couple of things need to be cleared up.

1. Add a little more to your abilities, practicing with badger moles could go under History, elaborate upon what simple/advanced bending techniques your character knows. For example:
"Perhaps not the best Earthbender Caeli does have a powerful array of techniques, including but not limited to: lifting heavy earth rocks and launching them at her adversaries."

2. Add more to the personality, is Caeli a sinister young earthbending prodigy? Does she admire certain qualities in others? Is she hotheaded? Anything other than she is quirky and cracks humor would add to Caeli being a more dynamic character.

3. Metalbending generally is for more advanced Earthbenders, average earthbenders would not know this skill, the exception being Toph, but being realistic here, that isn't plausible in New Chapters. If you want, Caeli could be a bit older, and thus would be able to metal bend.

4. I don't know if your going to change your current profile picture, but it would be nice if you could substitute the URL in the space where your Appearance should be.

For now, just continue working, and alert me or another admin. to approve you.

-Novai

PS: Do any other admin's have to add to what I listed?
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Caeli
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Caeli


Posts : 22
EXP : 275
Join date : 2012-05-26

Character Description
Age: 15
Position: Gifted Earthbending-Student.
Nation: Earth Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Caeli Sao-Kata   Caeli Sao-Kata EmptySat May 26, 2012 7:11 pm

I took your suggestions and expanded upon it, I also made it so that she is -attempting- to learn Metal Bending, but has not yet had any success.
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Posts : 332
EXP : -2
Birthday : 1994-11-12
Join date : 2011-09-03
Age : 29
Location : California

Character Description
Age: 20
Position: Fire Lord
Nation: Fire Nation

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PostSubject: Re: Caeli Sao-Kata   Caeli Sao-Kata EmptySat May 26, 2012 8:38 pm

Much, MUCH better, approved.

Welcome to New Chapters!

-Novai
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Caeli
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Caeli


Posts : 22
EXP : 275
Join date : 2012-05-26

Character Description
Age: 15
Position: Gifted Earthbending-Student.
Nation: Earth Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Caeli Sao-Kata   Caeli Sao-Kata EmptySat May 26, 2012 8:52 pm

Many thanks! :-)
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