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Feren
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Feren

Posts : 34
EXP : 1810
Join date : 2014-11-17

Character Description
Age: 17
Position: Engineer
Nation:

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PostSubject: Feren (FINISHED 2.0)   Feren (FINISHED 2.0) EmptyMon Nov 17, 2014 1:44 am

Full Name: Feren Alberd
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Element: Nonbender
Birthplace: Northern Air Temple
Position: Despised Shop owner
Training: Engineer (intermediate)

Personality: When making things, or even just thinking, he talks out loud and very fast. When people try to interrupt him or talk while he's talking he gets upset and usually snaps at them. If you ask him to explain how something of his works, be ready for a very long, incomprehensible explanation.
Feren is almost no help in a fight, as he has terrible aim with a sword or any other weapon. Although, since his Adjustable Monkey Wrench is always near him, if that hits somebody with it, it's a cracked skull.
Since birth, he has always liked to tinker with things. He will buy inventions just to take them apart and see how it was done to get inspiration for his inventions
Feren also has a strong sense of humor, and a strong sense of being just a nice guy in general. He helps everyone he can, never turning a blind eye. The few people in Ba Sing Se that know that he is a good guy buy from him, and that's how Feren keeps his business going. Pretty girls that are flirty are his weakness. He doesn't do whatever they say, he just can't function when they talk to him.
(140)

Abilities: Whenever he is making an invention, explosions and machinery breaking can be heard as Feren makes many mistakes, but he always comes out of it with a huge smile on his face. He tries out every option he has when making something new to make the best product possible, hence all the mess ups. He's always thinking of different ways to do things, to make things better.
He's very bright, and just from seeing a simple thing happen, like someone getting blown off of a building by an fiery explosion, he can think about several things that are similar that he could make, or ideas at the least. He's very good at measurements, putting things together at first glance, let's just say, if you buy IKEA furniture, he's your man if you've lost the instructions, or you're confused by them.
(140)

Appearance:
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 140 lb
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: Blonde
Skin: White

Feren Alberd has blonde scruffy hair that always looks like he has a bed head. He is 17 years of age and runs his own shop in Ba Sing Se. He made his own prescription goggles to help with his eye sight while he welds or is working in general. He is always wearing his goggles in his shop, and glasses when going out. From all the work he does solo, he has a pretty nice build on him from all the heavy work. Strong legs and good biceps and forearms. Thick work gloves are also on him most of the time, from when he gets up in the morning, to when he falls asleep or is taking a bath, which he doesn't have time for most of the time. Resulting in him being dirty or scraped up. Due to his woke that he always focuses on, sometimes his goggles are crooked, or there are red rings around his eyes from where they were.(140)

Other Gear:

Item Name: Adjustable Monkey Wrench
Materials: Strengthened Steel.
Description: A Monkey Wrench that can be adjusted for different nuts and bolts, but it's handle is also a screw driver that can fit all sorts of bits on it for screws. pretty heavy, and would give someone a nice crack in the head if hit with it.

Item Name: His Cargo Pants
Materials: A strong material that's similar to Kevlar. Very strong and durable.
Description: Dirty brown cargo pants that have seen a lot of use. It has pockets all over it for every type of nut, bolt, screw, washer, you name it, he has it in his pants.

History: His entire family are thieves and con-men, where Feren wants to run a legitimate business, but because of his family name, just about no one trusts him
Despite no one trusting him, he has trust issues himself. Although, there are a few people that know that Feren is a nice guy and wants to be legit, and they are the ones currently funding him to keep his shop barely open.
His parents were people who scammed people, made shotty machines and tools, and always had prices high. Never good people, and from time to time, they beat Feren, usually out of frustration or anger. Because of that, he's very flinchy, and violence makes him scared, but he's not afraid to make weapons of sort.
He tinkered with things, machines, and through it he made things that people actually bought when he was about the age of eight years old. Since then he's been making things for people. When he was 16 years of age, he got sick of his father and mother, and left the Northern Air temple.  He traveled Southeast, and came upon a hunter named Lynn. She helped him find Ba Sing Se, gave him a little money, and then left. Feren still has no idea where she is or where she went. He managed to make a shop in the Middle Ring and some supplies, and started to make things for people. First it was just toys, then he started to make repairs for tools, some people even using him like a hardware store and buying nuts and bolts.
His family name still somehow had a negative edge to it, even though his family shouldn't have been heard of this far outside of the Temple. He continues to make a small living doing odds and ends for people, doing whatever he can for them, never having a regular costumer. While on an errand to pick up raw metal, he found a flier. For Zulera City. He knew this was his chance. He started saving as much money as he could, using up as much materials as he could to make the travel easier.
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Feren
Junior Member
Feren

Posts : 34
EXP : 1810
Join date : 2014-11-17

Character Description
Age: 17
Position: Engineer
Nation:

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PostSubject: Re: Feren (FINISHED 2.0)   Feren (FINISHED 2.0) EmptyTue Nov 18, 2014 6:50 pm

DONE
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Meili
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Meili

Posts : 531
EXP : 43135
Birthday : 1991-01-16
Join date : 2011-11-30
Age : 28
Location : Wasatch Valley

Character Description
Age: 43
Position: Earth Queen
Nation: Earth Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Feren (FINISHED 2.0)   Feren (FINISHED 2.0) EmptyTue Nov 18, 2014 7:44 pm

so I assume your character box was left blank on purpose. also, your appearance and abilities are a few words shy of the required 140. fix that and I'll be glad to approve this.

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"Everything I do, I do for my people. Know this, and know that the Earth Kingdom will never fall as long as its people remain loyal to their nation." I do not fear your threats; I am Meili Mitali Zalika.
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Feren

Posts : 34
EXP : 1810
Join date : 2014-11-17

Character Description
Age: 17
Position: Engineer
Nation:

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PostSubject: Re: Feren (FINISHED 2.0)   Feren (FINISHED 2.0) EmptyTue Nov 18, 2014 8:11 pm

I did leave it blank on purpose, and I thought I counted them. Must have counted wrong. I will finish those promptly.
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Meili

Posts : 531
EXP : 43135
Birthday : 1991-01-16
Join date : 2011-11-30
Age : 28
Location : Wasatch Valley

Character Description
Age: 43
Position: Earth Queen
Nation: Earth Kingdom

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PostSubject: Re: Feren (FINISHED 2.0)   Feren (FINISHED 2.0) EmptyTue Nov 18, 2014 9:07 pm

alrighty. that looks better. APPROVED!

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Feren (FINISHED 2.0) GdtAyPMeili--Forum AdminFeren (FINISHED 2.0) Meloetta-pirouette [AKA Zul]
"Everything I do, I do for my people. Know this, and know that the Earth Kingdom will never fall as long as its people remain loyal to their nation." I do not fear your threats; I am Meili Mitali Zalika.
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